Hey FG

[Senses Fail]

I remember you saying one time that you would like to do some music. Well I got thinking the other day and I figured two things. 1) I'm going to quit that band with Buck and Jacob because I don't think metal is for me and we suck. and 2) if you're still up for it, we could get some people together and do some music stuff. I thought up all this stuff last night. It's just some ideas I've been throwing around in my head, feel free to change them where you see fit. First off, I've always wanted to do a concept album, so I sat down and thought of a story to tell (It's not the greatest but it would be a good start). Here's a quick synapsis of the story:

Christian and Ariel meet in their hometown of Las Vegas, NV and fall in love quickly. Shortly after, the world starts falling apart. Everything in the world collapses (economies, industries, etc...) at once. The ensuing global panic creates violence among the people all over the world. Christian and Ariel leave Vegas in search of a safer area but find that there is no place to go. The violence escelates and Ariel ends up getting killed by one of the violent social groups. Then, Christian starts plotting of ways to get back at the person (and his gang) that kiled her. When he goes to take his revenge, he gets killed. The story ends with Christian and Ariel meeting again at the Pearly Gates.

Here's the songs:

1) Prologue
2) When Eyes Meet
3) The Time: A Story Threads
4) Two at the Starlight Hall pt1
5) Todo ir al Infierno
6) The Last Best Place in Rio
7) Beware the El Reyes
8) Hitchhike to Hades
9) Axe to the Face of a Lover
10) Blood Streets of Shame
11) Trespassing in the land of the Dead
12) Abyss of Fear: Can one re-attain the lost?
13) Two at the Starlight Hall pt.2

[The Forum God]

well, I'm not gonna lie, you are probably farther ahead than I in the guitar apartment, just FYI. as for your idea, it's good, but if we were to completely make a coheed style career there, I don't know if I could do that. I do like the idea of the story (maybe some editing cuz it seems a little cheesy at times, no offense I culdn't do much better) but if we were to do this kinda storyline thing, along with other stuff (I think we could do a little bit of metal-esque stuff, it just takes more practice) but I got some humor ideas to go to (I figure along with the serious songs, we can mix some funny in there, like queen) I'm already thinking of a song dedicated to emomidget called "My heart is unlockable cuz I ate the key" (a dedication to one of her many emo shirts) which is in no way serious. the thing is we can just call to jam out and in the process write stuff.

I like your ideas bro, my only dillio is the way you're approaching music. I believe we gotta jam first before we get too far. I think we're making one too many steps forward before we begin. now if you've written something, then we can work on it, but to get our sens of music, one must learn what the abilities of fellow jammer are

[Senses Fail]

Yeah I like the idea of just jamming out some stuff and writing with that, I was just throwing out the song titles to just kind of get a feel for what the songs were going to be formulated around. I haven't written anything yet, I was waiting to see what you had to say about it first.

[Hobo4lfe]

first off

1. something with a story would be cool
2. naming your main character Christian.. SMURF you like that name alot, you cheap poppen sunofabusquit go buy yourself a Nis Pe

[The Forum God]

my only comment on the song titles is that some are pretty cliche and could use some beefing if we were to write them
trajety could turn into something more awesome like "the axe in the face of the lover" or something like that.

[Hobo4lfe]

wow, i would listen to that

[Senses Fail]

admin said:

my only comment on the song titles is that some are pretty cliche and could use some beefing if we were to write them
trajety could turn into something more awesome like "the axe in the face of the lover" or something like that.

Like "An Axe to the Face of a Lover"? That sounds awesome tbh ("to be honest" for all you slow ones *points at Punisher* lol)

[The Forum God]

you like that do ya? hear that hobo? BR is better than you right now.

yeah I could come up with a thousand more, but I'd hafta hear the rest of the music.

[Senses Fail]

admin said:

you like that do ya? hear that hobo? BR is better than you right now.

yeah I could come up with a thousand more, but I'd hafta hear the rest of the music.

HAHA Burn!

UPDATE: I've been working on some music for the first song that we "named" earlier in the thread. It's got like a slower paced punk wriff to it. I've got an intro and have roughed out the verse.

It kind of sounds like this (because it's live and they played it slower than normal):
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bU5UOb-W0bI

[The Forum God]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=hC0hLGOVSd0
just don't do anything like this

[Senses Fail]

^ Holy crap that sucks anus.

[The Forum God]

but if you check a lot of the covers there, he's right.
as for your thing, I like it, just keep it more storyline than emo. and maybe list those titles you had again (the cheesy ones) and I'll pimp them out or something

[Senses Fail]

I'll post them back up here in a minute, I've gotta find the paper I wrote them on first. and don't worry, I'll try my best to keep away from emo stuff.

Song are back up in main post

[The Forum God]

there ya go.

1) Prologue
2) When Eyes Meet
3) The Time: A Story Threads
4) Two at the Starlight Hall pt1
5) Todo ir al Infierno
6) The Last Best Place in Rio
7) Beware the El Reyes
8) Hitchhike to Hades
9) "Axe to the Face of a Lover"
10) Blood Streets of Shame
11) Trespassing in the land of the Dead
12) Abyss of Fear: Can one re-attain the lost?
13) Two at the Starlight Hall pt.2

some are good some a little wierd. 5 means (something like) all goes to Hell. el reyes means "the kings"

[Senses Fail]

They all sound pretty cool.